We received feedback from Mark and others on our table, we added notes to the blanks and have started to get more of an idea of where we are going.


Below are two quick felt iterations of kenzie and I attempting a visual rhetoric for our issue.

 I think continuing the process of story-boarding concepts will help us. Remembering the role narrative, metaphor, rhetoric plays in this visually.

The pages completed so far out of the 8 pages: 'Workplace Bullying'

 Looking forward to receiving much need feedback

 After struggling with our topic last week and after a discussion we came up with..

'Bullying in the workplace'

The idea was sparked through a personal experience of mine, and others close to me who have been in a similar position. It does have a profoundly negative effect on your well-being, therefore it fits the brief in a strong way.

Right now we feel its still a very broad topic, and want to consider ways of narrowing it down to be more specific.

Our first attempt at breaking down the 8 pages, still looking at body image.
Although after talking to fellow students today, we realized what a mixed opinion have of our topic. We worry that it may end up too controversial and difficult to deal with visually.

Back to the drawing board

Sarah and Kenzie get brainstorming

After teaming up together in class, we are both still unsure on what topic/direction we want to go ahead with.

We have considered the topic of 'body shaming' and the effect negative body image can have on ones well-being, mentally and physically.